Ab kuch apni tabiyat bhi juda lagti haisaans lete hai toh zakhmo ko hawa lagti hai aaj pee loo lamha lamha mai me gholkardekhe aakhir kab tak raat jaawa lagti haikabhie razii toh kabhie khafaae zindagi ab tu hi bata tu meri kya lagti haiAjab hai aaj fizaa bhi 'ghafil' kabhi rukti hai to kabhi ravaa lagti haiVery good lines. Sorry but I couldn't resist tempering with them.Welcome to Blogging.
And yes... my apologies to Atahullah Khaan too for tempering with his lines.
hey thnx for completing it..
Ab kuch apni tabiyat bhi juda lagti hai
ReplyDeletesaans lete hai toh zakhmo ko hawa lagti hai
aaj pee loo lamha lamha mai me gholkar
dekhe aakhir kab tak raat jaawa lagti hai
kabhie razii toh kabhie khafa
ae zindagi ab tu hi bata tu meri kya lagti hai
Ajab hai aaj fizaa bhi 'ghafil' kabhi rukti hai to kabhi ravaa lagti hai
Very good lines. Sorry but I couldn't resist tempering with them.
Welcome to Blogging.
And yes... my apologies to Atahullah Khaan too for tempering with his lines.
ReplyDeletehey thnx for completing it..
ReplyDelete